Tuesday, May 10, 2011

Haunted

Hello everyone,

This actually isn't a totally new story, but is actually an updated version of Memories, from before. It has a new, much better title as well as 33% changed content. I believe the flow is much better and the story ultimately makes more sense. I hope that you enjoy the story and, as always, feel free to let me know of any critiques or comments you have about the story. Thank you!

Haunted

-Devin

1 comment:

  1. Hi Devin,

    It's Steph. I don't have any accounts to comment from. I liked this story, though at times I was a bit confused about whether or not "I", "the boy", and "Hal" were different people or not. I'm glad you're keeping this blog up. We need to hang out soon!

    Steph

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